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   The walkway down the school was the same as usual, busy, full of people bustling around, some being inconsiderate by pushing and shoving. I was used to it and continued on my way to class. I looked around, taking in what I saw.

   My gaze caught on two people talking, I'd seen many stop at this spot to talk, usually one or two pairs daily. However, there was a bit more to it than just friends talking, I could tell.

   The guy had a certain fondness in his eyes, they were flickering from her eyes to her lips and back. His gaze was lingering, his posture leaning close to her, attentive. He was letting her do most of the talking, lips slightly parted almost as if he were urging to say something, but didn't. It was more than just a platonic sort of like, I could tell he liked her; I swear the infatuation was visible.

   I didn't get to see her actions and expression, her back had been to me and I only looked over for a moment, just a glance. The look lasted a few seconds, not enough to stop me or make me look back, and I went on my way again.
I was bored and decided to post a short text post on a moment of observation during my school day. Thought it might be a tad interesting, and it is rather entertaining to write; I'm pondering writing more. If I did, they'd be more in detail and lengthy.
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T0mHiddlest0n Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Great job, very observational! I've tried that before... It didn't turn out too well, my deductions are so short. I would've just been like "yah. he wants to bang her"
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Piratelock Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
Yeah, a lot of people would, It's not uncommon to think like that.
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T0mHiddlest0n Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Interface Designer
No problem!
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